just me
don’t bring me roses
with their blood red petals
with their gentle fragrance
with their thorny stems
with their soft cool frills
I could hold them close
and breath in their scent
but I’d rather hold you
I could look in wonder
at their perfect beauty
but I’d rather look at you
I could touch them to my skin
and feel their caress
but I’d rather touch you
bring me yourself
with your cuts and scars
with your sweet kindness
with your imperfections
with your tender love
just you
sounds better than any roses or chocolates.
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Yes I think so π
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Yay, very nice piece.
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Thank you π
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I like this particularly as I’m one of the few women who doesn’t like receiving flowers from a suitor…. π
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I only like them if I truly believe their sentiment. Too often they’re just an empty gift. Glad you liked it π
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i like the form of the poem!
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Thanks Melanie π
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Very sweet…
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Thank you Suraiya π
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Very nice!
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Thank you
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I truly loved this. So honest, yet still sweet.
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